Space Kids

Rodney Hannor, Jr.

Miss Tetters' 4^th Grade; Mr. Porter, Principal

North Hills Christian School, Vallejo, California

We were at the secret headquarters when Commander Joe Le called us to his office. "I

have a mission for you," said the Commander. "What is it?” I asked. Commander Le replied,

"There is an evil Queen that lives on Neptune, and controls all bad aliens.” “Sounds tough,” I

said. “It is tough , a lot of people have tried to arrest her, but failed!” explained the Commander.

“Don’t worry Commander Le,” said Isaac. Then we ran to our spaceship and turned on the

rocket.

Each rocket has an alien that repairs and keeps them in working order. "You

are clear for lift-off,” said one of the aliens. At the same time, we all said, “Roger that.” We are

now headed into outer space. Well sure, we hit some asteroids along the way but it was no big

deal. "Wow, there’s Mercury, Venus, Mars and Neptune! Neptune, turn here guys!” Said Evan.

When we landed on Neptune we saw an alien day dreaming about himself as a baby. A while

later, he woke up and saw us. "The queen saw us and spread evil all over the planet but I was able to

escape,” the alien told us. "Well take care of it," I said.

So we went into the town and saw a lot of weird aliens. We went directly to the queen's

castle and saw a robot speaking to her. "Some humans came to our planet and is probably in the

castle right now!” The queen demanded, "Warn everybody in the castle!” “Yes your highness

replied the robot. We had to hide somewhere. Everyone heard footsteps coming toward us. It

was a robot!" “Run!” I said. Isaac and I held off the robot so everyone could escape. Then we ran

when everyone left and saw a sign that reads JACKET CLOSET. That gave us an idea! Our

suits can transform into anything we want so we turned ourselves into coat hangers. "This is

very uncomfortable,” complained Chris. "You don’t see me complaining,” I said to Chris.

Nathan used his x-ray vision and said, The coast is clear.” Then we transformed back to

ourselves and left the closet "Now where is the queen?” asked Haitian. I know where she is,”

said Evan. "You do?" we all said together. "Yep, I shot a tracker on her back and with this

communicator we can find her,” Evan answered. I asked him, Where is she now?” My

calculations says she is right behind us!” he said. And there she was! Standing right behind us

the whole time! “Guards!” she yelled. They replied, You’re your highness?” “Take these

intruders to the dungeon!!” she demanded. So we were dragged and thrown into the dungeon.

I asked the guys, "Do you know what we forgot? We forgot Buddy

and Casey are our space canines. "Don’t worry, with this remote control I can teleport the dogs

here!"" said Chris. He pressed the buttons and Boom, Zap, Woof the canines appeared! Just

then, one of the guards walked by. "Hey you!" said Haitian. "What are these chains made out

of?" The alien replied, “Our worst fear! If we tried to eat it off, we would die." Then he walked

away. I kept telling Phillip to eat his Whatchamacallit bar to see what it is. Finally he ate it.

"Yummy! Its just candy you guys!” We all cheered and started eating. "Wait, take of

the candy on your right arm and give it to me," I demanded. "Matthew, can you open this door?"

I asked him. "Sure", he said. So Matthew destroyed the door and flew away with Isaac and

Haitian. They said they were flying of to bring the queen back here. They came back in an

hour. "Evan, you get the net gun. Chris, get the ropes. Phillip, get the candy bars. Isaac, get the

bubble gum! Nathan, get the lollipops. Buddy and Casey get me the buckets.” I demanded to

everyone.

Chris and Evan tied the evil queen up. L put a bundle of candy in her mouth to keep her

quiet. We threw her in our rocket and left the planet Neptune! When we got back, we threw her

in jail and went to see the Commander. He was happy to see us and said, “Good job!” The he

gave each of us Hero Medals. Even Casey and Buddy got one! “They didn’t even do anything,”

said Philip, "those lazy fur balls!” We all laughed and snorted. THE END